6th response

For my last entry Iam done with revision’s. I am submitting  my portfolio with my three best assignments, the review, the instructions and the essay. I revised all at least five time’s on each, and i am satisfied how they all turned out. The most challenging for me was the instructions because it involved visuals. I had to learn how to include them on my PowerPoint.  The one I enjoyed most was the essay because I like telling personal story’s and it gave me an opportunity to read where my weak points are and work on them. Overall I enjoyed this class, learning how to write better and learning how to use word press all these skill will remain with me for ever.

5th response

For this second to the last entry, I am wrapping up on my revision of the essay and review. From the time I started the essay until now I have noticed how much revision’s I have done to my essay. From fixing fragmented sentences to punctuation corrections. All were new to me when we first started, now I have a better understanding to what they all mean. My skills as a writer continue to grow and I am looking forward to using these skills in my summer English course 0950.

4th response

For this forth entry i am finishing revising my three assignments. The instructions, review summary and the essay, all now got a score of 5. Taking the steps to revise taught me where i was making my mistakes and how to better it. The essay is the most challenging for me, since this is my first one i have written. I am learning  about how to properly write an essay through trial and error.

3rd response

This week i got my revised essay. I am learning through my revision’s that my grammar and punctuation for English has gotten better. I see it in my writing skills with a score of 23 so far. I am also noticing that my old assignments are not as good as the revised ones. The skills i am obtaining will help me in Eng.0950 since they focus on essays.

2nd response

Today i got  essay grade of a 4 out of 5. My next step would be to take the advice of Mr.Turner and break up my body of the essay into 2-3 paragraphs instead of one long paragraph. I am also waiting on my revision of the instructions, from there i am going to start to revise my review, to include it with my portfolio. For next monday i should be ready for my last revision and ready to focus on my portfolio.

first response

Today i decided to choose the  summary assignment, instruction assignment and the essay asignment. I selected these three because i had fun writing all of them and they all got a good grade. Revisions made to these should be challenging, i am looking foward to getting everything done.

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