http://tjjjames.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 22 Apr 2009 15:46:14 +0000 en hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://s2.wp.com/i/buttonw-com.png http://tjjjames.wordpress.com http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/2009/04/22/6th-response/ http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/2009/04/22/6th-response/#comments Wed, 22 Apr 2009 15:46:14 +0000 tjjjames http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/?p=16 ]]> For my last entry Iam done with revision’s. I am submitting  my portfolio with my three best assignments, the review, the instructions and the essay. I revised all at least five time’s on each, and i am satisfied how they all turned out. The most challenging for me was the instructions because it involved visuals. I had to learn how to include them on my PowerPoint.  The one I enjoyed most was the essay because I like telling personal story’s and it gave me an opportunity to read where my weak points are and work on them. Overall I enjoyed this class, learning how to write better and learning how to use word press all these skill will remain with me for ever.

]]> http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/2009/04/22/6th-response/feed/ 0 tjjjames http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/2009/04/20/5th-response/ http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/2009/04/20/5th-response/#comments Mon, 20 Apr 2009 16:37:04 +0000 tjjjames http://tjjjames.wordpress.com/?p=14 ]]> For this second to the last entry, I am wrapping up on my revision of the essay and review. From the time I started the essay until now I have noticed how much revision’s I have done to my essay. From fixing fragmented sentences to punctuation corrections. All were new to me when we first started, now I have a better understanding to what they all mean. My skills as a writer continue to grow and I am looking forward to using these skills in my summer English course 0950.

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